Instruction's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thracian-Jazz]

Keep it up

Not too bad, not too bad :-) Overall, this is still an enjoyable piece. Sometimes the piano seemed to work against the harmony. Very nice movement over-all, good stuff.

sorohanro responds:

not too bad ? still an enjoyable piece ? ... well ... what can i say ... ?
thanx for review and for kind of good mark (but sincerely i'll give myself 10 for this)

and about the chords on piano ... well, is the usual in jazz to have more complex harmonies, using 7-th or 9-th chords or even polyharmonies.

thanx again for review

[Without a Ticket]

Beautiful

Almost 9 minutes of pimping. I'll be working to this for a good amount of time, for sure. Good job and thank you.

[Synaptitron]

Too much noise

You need more harmony. More scale. It sounds like a hack job in some senses, try adding more bass some common motif of a melody. Better to have 3 great tracks and a repetitive song than a big conglomerate of extremely simple disjoint/conflicting tracks.

Looking forward to your future work.